I had nothing in my mind, so tried this...you could call it a poetry from a novice.The sea shore rain
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Yesterday we freed our minds in the sea shore rain
A lot was assuaged within, the agony and pain.
The waves were ferocious yet wonderful
Just like our hearts bountiful
I clasped your supple palm
Allowing my confused mind to become calm
The rain drops washed your fair skin
Making you look like an ebony figurine
Oh ! you are the sweetest of all
No wonder I, to your grace did fall.
2 comments:
Hi! I do like that line 'clasped your supple palm...'because it's lovely and surprising.
Thanks for sharing! Keep writing!
Thanks @Sophie Nicholls
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